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I just read chapter 2, this story is just getting better! But when are the other girls going to have some fun with the agents?

Girl I love this chapter! Very hot!

I just finished reading all 8 chapters and... wow. I MUST have more of this story! I didn't think "femOC gOC gets it on with the Agents" could be done in a way that didn't make me roll my eyes, but "The Logic of Desire" has convinced me otherwise. It is intelligent, well-written, and hot. Very, very hot. :-)

Whew! I'm exhausted after reading this story! Please continue...I must know Xan's fate. Will she remain in Zion, now that she know the awful truth? My money is on the Agents somehow convincing her that she should remain with them in the Matrix. Somehow, the Agents seem more humane in their treatment of Xan then her fellow Zionites. By the way great sex scenes, they left me breathless. Awesome!

C.

Omg..this story is sooooooo good! Your descriptions and imagry are simply amazing. I've never read a matrix story,lemon or otherwise, that made me feel more like i was there. Please please please pleeease update soon! I'm dying to know what happens!

I'm not normally a fan of agent smut, but I think this is well-written and hot as hell. Please continue. I want to see how Xan resolves the conflicts she feels.

I think I'd have enjoyed this story more if she had just beevolvvolved with one agent (preferably Smith!). It is not plausible to have a deep and meaningful relationship with three men (agents?). I only read a bit, and was put off by the fact that the MC does seem a bit on the shallow side. I haven't read as far as the chapter about the rape (I've just read the reviews), but I do think that too many stories on this site glorify rape, and characters who are raped recover from it far too quickly. I'm not sure I'd want anything to do with people (agents?) who'd raped 107 people, either, but hey, she's your character.

You write well, but the emptiness of the sex is a bit offputting.

Well, now, I have finished reading this new chapter. Described in one word: it's... Amazing. When you first started writing your story, I thought it would be an original Smith sex story, but now it's turning into something deeper - something I like quite a lot! I love the references to the Animatrix, your describtions of 01 and the War - and it's origin. I am a strong believer that Humans have started the War - and not the machines.

Keep up the good work - and keep updating!

Love,
Selina

I love this story so far :) Please update again soon :)

YYYYYEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!! I cannot tell you how happy i am. I nearly fell of the chair when i saw LOD and chapter eight. I actually shouted out WOOHOO! And began to punch the air (That's why i nearly fell off, bandy chair.) Don't you dare go away again. This story is just so good. ('c',) b