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why men well not real men...tavington continue to defend common whores is beyond me. as a widow this slut (who im still praying dies horribly and painfully) would have good status. i assume she would habe a military stipend and being a widow is honorable annnd yet in true whore fashion she decides to be ut of the year. ease kill her off in a hideously gory way

ughhh god u really love adding useless whore like jane, there was another one in another story and then pathetic weepy women who will accept said whore or accept their "fate" id like to see it switched up with a strong woman protaganist. and then kick that Jane bitch off a cliff. the only joy i get reading this is when she cries like the pathetic camp slit she is

ughhh god u really love adding useless whore like jane, there was another one in another story and then pathetic weepy women who will accept said whore or accept their "fate" id like to see it switched up with a strong woman protaganist. and then kick that Jane bitch off a cliff. the only joy i get reading this is when she cries like the pathetic camp slut she is

ok see so this should be the character of caroline when she finds the pathetic slut jane pregnant...befriend her then shove her in a fast flowing creek with her dresses on so she drowns or go for a horse ride and kick her off HARD with your foot or spook the horse...oopsy wasnt my fault ugly ass tavington that ur slut took a fall sorry to say ur ugly kid amd she wont make it. i really really loathe weak ass females

nope changed my mind. i dont know why u have such sympathy for these pathetic flowers. i would like to see tavington HIMSELF burn these bitches..so what i mean is he falls madly in love with carine and tell this jane whore to beat it, making her cry and beg in front of the whole fort causing a scene, then kick jer out penniless and let her and her bastard kid rot. it should be done by him for maximum pain. she should feel as useless and pathetic and unwanted as possible until she decides ro end her lofe out of misery...she hangs herself in the woods and her bastard kid dies of exposure. she knows she is alone unwanted amd abandoned....yesssss. no one likes these losers or feels bad for them so not sure why they keep popping up

i actually like general ohara. i think he knows what an asshole tavington is. love the part in the movie where he stops tavington at the fort from going after martin....he totally emasculates that asshole it's awesome

Lovely story!

I absolutely loved this story. It's one I've come back to quite a few times. I don't know what it is, but there is just something about it that draws the reader in. Also, it is a shame you've received such criticism about this story. It's completely unwarranted.

Speaking of bitchy posters Arsinoe could use a break from debating if she can't stay on topic when discussing an argument presented before her. Grammar doesn't make a good story, it's purely technical this story suffered from weak characterization - Tavington was too evil, Caroline was too weak. They didn't mesh well and she was lusting after him the whole time with not anything else going on.

Hey guys, its just a story relax. A review section is not really the place to be bitchy(I'm looking at you Lynx).
To get back on topic I enjoyed the story without reading to much into it. The grammer and spelling were correct as far as I could see. Overall good story, interesting premise, competently done.