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All I want to say is that this fic is absolutamazamazing! XD Aside from the style, which in and of itself is noteworthy, the plot is quite original and I can see a lot of potential for a truly magnificent fic. Thank you for writing such a beaul pul piece of work. I hope there is more to it than that, it would make an awesome series. It has to be my favorite of all the Troy fics I've read so far. And the dream was simply... WOW. XD I so want to see more. Will Paris and Achilles eventually get together? And why did they both have the same dream. I wanna know. *whines like a sad puppy* Please continue to write.

Oh, and thank you very much for putting the character info at the bottom. It helped out a lot for someone like me who is com completely familiar with the book. It's been years since I've read it and the names can get a bit confusing.

this dark is is the best I have read in a long time! I love it

A most wonderful work; I know exactly what you mean by "hoping to stem the flood of Mary Sues" at FF.net in they fay fandom-- I myself am working on something with that goal. :P

I loved your use of language most of all; very fluent, and your portrayal of Paris is lovely-- beloved of Aphrodite he certainly is, AND also, I must thank thee for continuing to fuel my recent obsession with Hector/Paris slash; the idea had never occurred to me when I first read the Iliad, but after watching the movie, well, Eric Bana and Orlando Bloom just look far too fetching. :)

And about the birth order of Priam's sons, Paris should be second oldest, not second youngest; Hecabe was Priam's second wife, but she bore his first two sons. And that would be Hector and our lovely Paris. :)

I love the idea. Can't wait to see where you take it!

Oh gosh...I am just so happy for Inu - he's overcome so much. This was a beautifully written tale about the underdog/misunderstood coming out on top because of his inner strength. Ok, that sounds cheesy...but truly...your story at points brought me to tears, but here I am at the end feeling so happy that Inu is head of the class, has an intact family, and he got the girl!

Wonderful writing! Bravo. :)

how romantic. thanks for the update.

I don't want this story to end. It has been funny and educational and sensual. Have you/would you consider doing a sequel about their business venture? The Neville twist was fantastic and Sus'us' dealings with him in the hospital were wonderful...and all because Hermione taught him compassion. I loved it. Thanks again for writing.