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by MiyuKotabouki

person Blackrosephantom
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I liked your hilarious line at the beginning, I do not own Labyrinth...these people do...I'm only perverting their characters. =LOL= Jareth is such a tease! =Whips a hand-cuffed and masked Jareth on his nice big ass and hips= Your story is pleasant and off to a good start. You need to work on your grammar. Please resume this interesting tale.
person tobias
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really hope you write more to this really awsome story.
person Erin
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
deffinatly a good plot.. but it is a little on the short side.. and there is a lack of detail.
person SP777
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...and that's it? ~_~

WHAT kind of author ARE you? *grrr*

Oh by the way, glad SOMEONE is writing Labyrinth fics again, it's been too long.