rate_review Reviews

This is a truly well done story. The development plot and characters were well defined. You are a very good writer. Outstanding job really. You ever gonna continue it because it kinda got hanging there?

This is the first Riddick fic I have read that I thoroughly enjoyed. The plot and additional characters fit together perfectly and the true personalities of the characters that already existed shine through wonderfully. The style is very well put together and unlike in most fics I have not spotted the atrocious amounts of grammar and spelling mistakes that I usually see. Bravo! Keep it coming!

~Dark

OMG !!! SO good!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
I love it!!!

Just got done reading this story, I'm so impressed! This is my first trip over to AdultFanFiction and I have to say that I'm glad that I picked this story to be my first read, it was well worth it! I seem to have become captivated by this impressively complex new universe you've created for my very favorite convict and I can't wait to see where this story goes from here!

i love this story. one of my all time favorites. wonderfully written!!

I really enjoyed your story and I hope that you continue to write it. The characterization is very appealing and so is the story line. Have you considered archiving it at AO3?

This is fantastic! I can't wait to see more. You've kept them in character surprisingly well, and I adore your OC. Fabulous!

oooh, i cannot wait til the next chapter!

I can't believe I just discovered your awesome story!!! Truly, I think it may be one of, if not the best Riddick fic out there... including my own. Your attention to detail (like all the Alpha's having shined eyes) while still keeping Riddick, well, Riddick is awesome. I love how you dispatched the Necro's without it seeming too rushed, and kept Vaako around. Even with his nefarious wife, he seemed like a descent guy (relatively) just trying walk the line between doing right by what he knows, and what he knows is right. And somehow, I like the idea of a Vaako/Kyra hookup. They're really just two sides of the same coin, if you think about it. Moving on to Li... she's a perfect match for Riddick, without being too Mary-Sueish. I think it will be interesting to see how she reacts to Riddick having seen her darker memories, and how brutal she'll be when they catch up to Toombs and friends.
Awesome job! Really!! (Just brainwash me and call me Kate, lol)
I really hope you continue to update!!!

K

I just finished this wonderful story. Thank you so much for posting it. Have you written anything else about Riddick?