rate_review Reviews

This was probably the best post-tcor fic I've ever read. I loved the way you managed to tie every detail we know of Riddick together, and even IMHO managed to explain the differences in his characterization between the 2 movies.

My only problem with the fic is that it didn't last about 100 chapters. I would have happily gone on reading it forever. Unfortunately it only took me about two days, though it might have taken longer if I hadn't called in to work just to stay home and read!!!

Again: Brilliant. Great characters, loved how you made the Furyans. Great plot. Great imagination. Great storytelling, and there were some rather iffy moments in there when the sci-fi got deep and the info dumps had to be long. Just all around a great story. I'm not usually a fan of the 'and they live happily ever after', but Riddick deserves to have all his dreams come true on occasion.

Now, will there be a sequel? You played around a lot with who would end up with who and then didn't set any of it straight. The Vaako/Kyra sequel would be fun. You had her decide that her love was familial, but maybe his blossoming feelings, both lust and humour, will sway her to see him as a real man. Plus that little chase scene would end up being quite funny.

Which reminds me that I loved the humour of this. I laughed out loud at several spots.

Great. Great. Thanks for the wonderful read!

Chris

Usually I don't read any fics other than those of the HP universe, but when I saw you had other stories posted, both based on Vin Diesel movies, I just had to read them. And I thoroughly enjoyed. I hope you'll be updating soon, this is a wonderful story! You have this wonderful talent for keeping your characters believeable, and keeping in mind the other characters. In the way you write your characters, you make sure each one brings something to the plot, and adds more depth to the story. It's not as noticeable in some fan fics by different authors, and completely lacking in all the others. It's a joy to read the stories you write. Please update when real life allows you the time!

I love your fanfiction story, but is there going to be more or does it end at chapter 19?? Please update soon!!

That was really cool, I don't often enjoy Fanfics about one of my favorite movies, but a friend told me to read this one and I'm glad I did. Can I hope for any more on it?

Oh, I like it. I hope this isn't the end?!

I know you have already been told this but can you please fix the chapters when you can. I love the story by the way. I hope you can work on it soon.

Obviously you are a very busy person, but if you find a spare moment, PLEASE get chapters 12 and 13 back in here. You write nice long chapters, so I simply cannot read the rest of the story with so much missing. This is a great Riddick fic and I would love to read the rest....

Please say you are gonna finish this story. I think you stopped writing when it was going to become a really big world of Furyans, a few packs, and strange unknown enemies.

I love the story, but there seems to be a few chapters missing. I've read through to chapter 11, but the next chapter is 15. What happened to chapters 12-14?

Don't know if you noticed, but chapters 14 and 17 "Running on Empty" are the same. Anyway, love the story so far.