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by DonnaLynn

person Skizzy16
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. i. love. this. story!!! I thought the ned of chapter 10 was fantastic!!!! It make me want to read more!!! Which i will do in one minute but i have to ask what happened to the chapter where acgilies rescues Briseis??? i was so upset when there was a huge jump :( I really did not expect patrclus's death to be a dream. That was really clever :) PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
person ronandhermy
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is brillant. I"m really enjoying the twist and turns of the story. Great job. Keep going.
person aaa
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good but where is the missing part ;)
person Sarah
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good!!

I love everything about this story!!

a little disappointed that it hasn't been updated in a while though. Please update, I don't like starting an awesome story just to have in never be finished.
person clavira
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bites nails* Oh my... I hope everything's going to happen smooth - that is, if it's possible to be in war ^__^
Anyway, I really hope you update soon, I'm looking forward to it!
person Candice
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg.. YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY. I love this fic... I love Briesis and Achilles ... please update.. lovely work
person splash
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is it just me ... or is chp4 missin the last half? great story tho.
person aCharmedOne
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's great. When will you go on with this story? I really want to know what you have in store.

Update soon pretty please!

Bye aCharmedOne
person madysen
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing... can't wait to see what happens next
person hibi
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an interesting way to stop Patroclus from fighting. especially since prophecy dreams fit in nicely with greek mythology. but it was kinda scary when achilles left briseis and said the jist of what he said to her while he died in the movie. very cute so far ^^