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by DonnaLynn

person Meredith
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please keep it coming.
person hibi
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz write the next chapter cause ^^ i can't wait to see what happens. !!!
person Anonymous
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the best Troy fanfiction i've ever read! when i'm reading this, especially the romantic/dramatic scenes, i'll get shivers and i'll feel like my heart stopped beating. I REALLY LOVE YOUR FANFIC! Achilles and Briseis is the best pairing and you made it better! it can't get any better than this but if it does, you should publish this in a book. I'm so addicted to this fanfic, i daydream about it in my classes. i'll seriously, like, replay the scenes over and over in my head and still get shivers. i get called on by the teacher a lot and get blamed but it's sooooo worth it! I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU! please keep up the good work!!!!!!!!! <33333333333
person gg
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story !
person woodstock1219
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it....more,more,more!!!
person mrs. s
schedule August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So. GOOD!!! Exactly the way I pictured it. It's perfect. Love it. Might I suggest some one-shot love scenes or a 'what if' story where A&B live happily ever after? I don't know. It's just that this story really hit the spot since 98% of the Troy stories are M/M Inc, and I just wanted to read something faithful to the relationships to the movie. Oo, it would be great if you e soe some H/A stories too!!! Happy writing, please come up with more!
Cheers!
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE update soon!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
person Tina
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW!! i loved your story!! Keep adding to it and maybe add a part at the end where Achilles and Brisies (SP?) reunite.
person nora
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great fanfic!!!! i really adore it! i love the a/b pairing, and i don't care if it's historically inaccurate! please do not listen to those who say those stupid things...that's why it's fanfiction, it's gotta be inaccurate! i loved your way with words and how you make this whole story flow! i wish i could write like you...anyways, big adoration on my part! please do update, soon if it's possible!!!
hugs nora ;p
person nora
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
and just that you know this is the best fanfic i read this far and i'm reading since second of june!!!