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O.O wow that was hot i think i'm gonna take a cold shower now. I have to say you are the first aurthor to make me want one. please keep up the awesome work.
Niiko

Ahhh lemoney goodness. Or...Orangey as the case may be. Very nice.

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It's rare that an original character doesn't become a Mary-Sue. I'm proud of you.

Hot! Hot! Hot! I hope there is more to come!

Hoooo! That was hot. A very nice PWP. Made all the more interesting by well fleshed out emotions and dialogue. Good Job.

HOTT DAYUMMMMMM JARBABYJ...OMFGGGGGGG!! This is sooo hott, sexxxxxxxy, erotic, heart-felt, sad, sweet and a whole bunch of other things. I'm all teary-eyed because ol gurl was so afraid to let go and be pleasured. She kept saying Sir, like a freakin robot there to only serve him. It was soo very sweet and touching of him to say that he wanted to hear HER!! He just didn't want to be pleasured..he want to please HER also and I LOVED THAT. MY GAWD I LUVE THAT..I WANT MO PLEASE...PLEASE say there's more because this has touched me soo much...Thanks for writing...GRRREAT JOB!!

I like this story very much. Against my will I found myself looking for Riddick fanfics, and I was pleasantly surprised to find this one.
I like your style very much, and your portrayal of the character of Riddick is nearly flawless. He does and says things in this story that make me smile to myself and think "Yeah, that's Riddick alrightThouThough we are but humble peddlers of pornography there's no reason that it shouldn't be done with the style and clasat yat you have managed. Well done, you should be very proud.

Excellent story! I can't wait to hear about the tattoo. I hope you continue with this story.

Hi,

please write a new chapter!!!

PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!