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for Long Time Coming

by Evenstar

schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was poetic. I enjoyed that Riddick was still himself, but changed. Good job.
person jarbabyj
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice drawing in of a lot of detail. The writing felt like water, perhaps more like the elemental was narrating it than riddick.