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for Bad Lunch, Good Dessert

by hellborne

person AlBelle
schedule May 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope wherever you are, dear Hellbourne, that you can read this and smile. I've discovered your wonderful fic writing abilities far too late.i have only been reading your stories for two weeks, but was grieved and saddened to learn of your passing almost ten years ago. I love your fiction, and your wonderful writing abilities. I just hope wherever you are, whatever form you have taken, that you continue to write wonderfully. Much love, ferret mommy... Your newest fan, Detafo.
person COOKIE!!!!
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! CHOCLATE FETISH WILL!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!My sister says she'd like what he's haveing....MOM!? NOT YOU TOOO!!!!!! EEEWWWWWW MOM DON'T SAY STUFF LIKE THAT!!!!!!(curls into a ball looking for happy place)
person Ish Poisend
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD.
This what hilarious, drugged Jack, confused Will, the smut the sex, and wonderfull ending!
WHAHA. I laughed till I cried till i laughed again.
Meanwhile, I got soaked in more then just tears ;)
Very well done, and enjoyable read.
Hug.
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi love you!
person Demon
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was absoultly amazing great work I love this ^-^
person Lost
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story I wish you were here to make more like it Momma this for you! Girl!
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_0 best will/jack story ever!!!!
person Tsukiyomi
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! At first I thought it would be a bit terrible since it was rape, but it was made more consensual halfway through. Really good one-shot.
person AREWEN MELETHERON
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE STORY IS REALY GOOD .....AND WOW THAT WAS ONE MEAN CASE OF FOOD POSIONING!
person Apollo
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm shocked! No, not really...I adore it...Chocolate Covered Sparrow?

Here I was thinking the lemon was a hallucination and not real at all...and then BAM it's real and yeah..

--licks lips-- I shall be remembering this one.