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for Bad Lunch, Good Dessert

by hellborne

person Ryoko Katsuya
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chocolate covered butt sex,my new favorite food...
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals wth joy* I loved it but I have one complaint: There's not enough of it!!
person Kimura
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost wish it had been longer! I loved this. The girl that requested it pretty much read my mind. ^_^
person DaNNie Yoko
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot!Happy happy!I like Chocolate even more now!^.^
person Joseph
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Three words for you.
1) Drool
2) and
3) Faint

I absolutley loved the story. Especially the little recipe of Jacks. (I'm gonna have to try that with my b/f ^-^.) It's an amazing story and as it was said earlier...I wish there was a sequel. I showed the story to my boyfriend Rob and he couldn't walk normally for atleast 15 minutes. (Which is probably the best you'll get with him.) Anyway. No need boring you with my sensless babble. Write on! You are amazing!
person steph
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god i love it i love it i love it ^_______^ it was the coolest thing i have ever read in my life ^_________^
person Hikara
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me likeys! Awesome story. Could there possibly be more? I'll get on my knees and beg if that'll help... :)
person Natashya
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yum yum! Lovely little story there... but then, I do like PWP's. ;o) I really liked this, you wrote it well. And, I'd LOVE one of those Chocolate Covered Sparrows, anyplace selling them! ;o)
person joonatan
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha...what can I say...*drools*... I don't think I can think clearly for a while, so...thanks. Good one, way to go etc
person rys
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is there a site with an some sort of archive from that Jack/Will Ficathon II? I tried looking with google, but didn't find anything. If there is, can you pleasse mail the link?
Cool story by the way.