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schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done, please continue. PMEL
person Lily
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOOOODIIIEEE!!!! ADD MORE! MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!
person Gaps of Misery
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, FINALLY!!! *lol* Wow, breathtaking chapter!! Absolutely great!! :) I hope this means there will be smut in the next chapter... ;)
person aria624
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has morphed into something truly beautiful. The different perspectives give the story a fresh feeling (even for someone who knows the story... let's say fairly well). You have an uncanny ability to see into the mind of the character—their
person Onitsu Blackfeather
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be pretty good. The erotic dream was a nice touch. It showed that she did desire him but there were obsticals in the way. Please update soon? I want to read the rest of this. I don't mind retellings of the movie really.
person Allyce
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty dang good! Some of the chapters I had read previously, so it's all piecing together quite nicely. I don't think the synchronicity with the film's script does anything negative to your piece, so kudos to you!
person Aria624
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter does an incredible job at keeping the mood dreary, the tone remorsful, and the overall feeling of sadness. It sets the stage perfectly for what I assume the rest of the story will hold. This story, it seems, is meant to be read aloud..
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg katelyn u are a fucking good writer omgoodness lol i felt like i was IN the book..... i just think u shouldnt quote directly so much idk tho
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start! I like it - Meg's perspective - a nice change :) I hope you continue.
person Traci
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Katelyn!!!
I love the fact that you did this from Meg's point of view. I was always curious about her in the film and it seemed that she deserved a larger part! You capture the entire essance of "the phantom." Keep on writing cause you are so so tala