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cool. u should continue it.

Anakin's flaw, this is a theme you love and I can see why. There is a lot of psychiological mileage in it and it's all fascinating.

I'm so hooked on all of your stories. I just discovered them last week and have been spending all of my free time reading the fics that you posted to this board. You show should an intense darkness that lives within Anakin, while making it completely believable. This story is great because we get to see how Anakin got so fixated on Padme in the first place. Can't wait to read more.

Excellent so far just like all of your other work. I’m eager to read more, please update soon.

"...and a new memory is mapped." As always, Kelly, your writing exceeds all expectations! This is a wonderful view of Anakin's growing years and his melding of his love for Shmi and Padme. I cannot wait to read more of this! Lots of new phrases here for me to study and emulate! artiarticularly like the comparison of her turning the snippet end over end to a rock tumbling in a river. Keep going!!

Great so far, like all your other stories. You have the unusual talent of having believable characterisation as well as the great sex sce whi which seem very well thought out.