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for Traveler's Teatime

by AuroraStewart

person Sam
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*whines* No! I thought I'd finally found an out-and-out smut piece on Carl and Gabriel. Will there be another chapter? Will Carl ever get thoroughly screwed by Gabriel? WILL THIS SEXUAL TENSION EVER BE RESOLVED?!

Oh, ah, sorry. I didn't mean to go all caps on ya.

Looking forward to(hopefully) more!
person Brain_Shibito
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0____0 It... was all... just... a DREAM?!?!?! GAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! That has GOT to be one of the most cruel and EVIL endings I've ever read! On the other hand, wondeful story! I truely loved the whole growl and drunk Van Helsing!
person Aerochicky1
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am pleased to accept the honor of being your first reviewer for this fic. ha ha
No!
It's just a dream! No! Hee hee. Great stuff! It would be cool if you took this further...hmm...many possibilities!
person Aerochicky1
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
By the way, I like your screen name. May the Force be with you, always!
person aleera21
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey - interesting approach - are you going to continue this? I for one would like to hear more - will Carl be able to act out his fantasies with gabriel eventually etc?