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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise and I was very curious because I loved that movie, but after the first 15 grammar/spelling mistakes I couldn't go on. Sorry! Reading a scientist's journal with three mistakes right in the first sentence? That just killed my suspension of disbelieve. Maybe get a beta for that? Because I think the story would be worth it.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You don't need to recap what happened in the movie. Most people have seen it. It's one of my favorites as well. Just get one with your story. You have alot to work with. Be creative.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, are you ever going to continue this? *Hopeful look*
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I loved this movie..Sting is so hot...but yeah, I can't wait til you write more!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Someone else remembers this film! It was an awesome movie, and I was so glad to see this fan fic based on it. I hope you write more on it, I am really enjoying your style so far!