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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
May we all have a death like that - exquisite and macabre and of our own makeing. The circular effect of the story is delightful and satisfying. Beautifully done and very powerful. Thank you.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don' really get it. Jack dies and Will kills Norrington and... what's the connection?
_melissa
_melissa
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo...this was wonderfully written.
I quite enjoyed it and was very impressed with the ending/outcome...definantly different and original. WOOT!
Great job! Keep it up ^_~
I quite enjoyed it and was very impressed with the ending/outcome...definantly different and original. WOOT!
Great job! Keep it up ^_~
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kind of confusing, but a really great story. made me shiver. blood play can be alot of fun. i also liked it how you described in detail in cutting the flesh. very real. i felt the pain...and love. wonderful story.
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You gave me a shiver. Great story, great hook. I was wondering why Will was there instead of where he was supposed to be. Made perfect sense at the end.