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for All Manner of Sins

by KathleenTrinity

schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm. In the first chapter, you had Hector turning away from Achilles because it was an 'abomination'. I don't know if you knew this, but the Greeks had no aversions whatsoever to homosexuality. It was sometimes even encouraged. I'm not sure if this is the 'abomination' that Hector was talking about but yeah. I just thought I'd let you know.
person immagonnakickyourass
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so... who thinks ms. trinity needs to write more smut?
person caligula
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*goes down to her knees* please update soon, I need to know what is going to happen next - and please, don't kill Hector! I jump at every AU hoping to find Hector alive in the end (and with a steamy happy-end ^_~), but they always kill him *wails*
person you know who
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* what will happen? and despite having read future parts of the story, i really don't know. but mansex! rock! write more now!!!!!!
person Angel
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those two are as yummy as ever. :)

'It was a combination of sweat and dirt and Hector slowly breathed it in as if it were the finest perfume. '
Sigo swo sweet.

Is the thing with Patroclus going to happen? That's going to be heartbreaking. :(
person lawnmower
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dances around in happy little circles* gay men being all cute makes me happy. but... they need to have some more mad wild sex before hector kills patroclus and then achilles gets mad and kills hector... so... you heard me, write more fic, you muggle bitch! and i mean that in the best possible way
person Angel
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'Hector made it un-molested to the shelter. '
Not for long. ;)

I love to see them chatting and at ease with each other sharing heartfelt thoughts. Very nice.
person angel
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, very ingenious way of getting Hector to Achilles' arms. :)

Sneaky Helen. I think she's quite safe by that time anyway, the war's really inevitable by that moment.

person Rake
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again, such lovely writing. And the thought of more preety boy bits makes me drool. I simply cannot wait for the full version of the next part. And I agree with the scary lawn mower chick...Our canon is formidable and also very loud. Go look on page 645 of OotP...*nods* canon, my dear, you cannot argue with canon. But look at me, what am I do distracting you from writing. Go! I want more yummy boy sex!
person Angel
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The different perspectives on the events were nice.