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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Wedge Antilles falls in love"
Not with Mirax, he doesn't.
So sorry, try again.
Not with Mirax, he doesn't.
So sorry, try again.
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March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to review the whole story, even tho' you only have the 1 chapter up here; I found the rest at ff.n, but I don't like thate.
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I never would have thought of Wedge/Mirax. They seem so complete as brother-and-sister. But you made their evolving relationship totally believable. I esp. enjoyed the bits of Wedge's past you put in, and you portrayed his grief heartbreakingly well. Very nice bit of foreshadowing about his dancing, too!
The consummation of their love was very sweetly sexy. I like that you described it without too much graphic detail, just enough to be sexy.
If you end up adding the rest of the chapteo tho this site, I'll probably add Forbidden to my list of favorites if you don't mind. I've got a real weakness for Young Wedge, as you can prob. tell from my own writings. Especially Young Wedge written as well as this.
e.
I never would have thought of Wedge/Mirax. They seem so complete as brother-and-sister. But you made their evolving relationship totally believable. I esp. enjoyed the bits of Wedge's past you put in, and you portrayed his grief heartbreakingly well. Very nice bit of foreshadowing about his dancing, too!
The consummation of their love was very sweetly sexy. I like that you described it without too much graphic detail, just enough to be sexy.
If you end up adding the rest of the chapteo tho this site, I'll probably add Forbidden to my list of favorites if you don't mind. I've got a real weakness for Young Wedge, as you can prob. tell from my own writings. Especially Young Wedge written as well as this.