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for Forging a Relationship

by hellborne

person Oo
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww(wipes tear from eye) how sweet is that!!!!!! My lil babies all grown up and stealing mens hearts.....
person Apollo
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice...An interesting twist m'dear...Off to find another one of your stories to enjoy ^.^
person Lydia NightShade
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw!

That was sadly sweet. i really enjoyed this. Very cute and unique. Well written too. You do not suck. :-P
Some people just don't review on this site. Believe me I know. I've had stories up for ages and I still have one with nothing. Not even a fucking star raiting. Geeze... sorry, author rant.
person Lady_Mashala
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue this? It would be great... *hinhinthint*
person alina
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! that was soo good!!mmm, *mumbles* gotta go take care of some things...
person Rayne
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Spicy! *grins* That was some kind of lovely there! I applaud. *applauds* ^_^
person littlebird
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm - yummy.
Poor Jack, without Will for so many years he didn't recognise him, and no rum either.
It's a pity the request forbid a dominant Will. I wonder what punishment for rape the Pearl's articles might have and how Jack would take to it.
person NEWENIT
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well....I for one LOVED this lil tale....I thought it was so hot the way you had Will trussed...and the part about the pistol at Will's crack...just priceless!!at'at'll do it everytime.

NEWENIT