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for The Devil's Bride

by evileyedpirategrrl

person Jula
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Read your authors note... and didn't you know that there is an actual Pirate Porno movie that just came out this year?... it's called "Pirates".. aptly enough... and it's full on hardcore Porn... they spent a lot of money on the movie and it looks pretty good... you should all check it out...
person sinfulxdesires
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh Jack I love you! *grins ans takes a swig of rum* I love what you've done with Jack, he's more sensual then ever and I think I want a piece! Please add more soon.
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is... incredible. Jack, Will, and Elizabeth.. all together again. Yay! and Anne? She and Jack.. such entertaining chemistry!

You obviously have watched POTC hundreds of times... it shows... (cuz so have I!) this is an unbelievable fan fiction.. please continue!!


*Silent Writer*


I just joined.. is there a way i can get author alerts? LoL...

person Anon
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story it's very cute so far and hope to see/read more soon. Keep up the good work
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Hmmm. I can't wait until Jack really gets under her skin. I wonder what he will do when he finds out the trust?
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Dammit! The word above should have been 'truth' and I realised after I hit the send button...! :D
person Linnie
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice indeed me lovely! *wink* You write extremely well and I have to say that I really enjoy your take on Elizabeth & Will's lives after their adventure with Jack and the Pearl. Bonny was also a wonderful addition to the story and she fits in wonderfully. I love that in the last chapter you made her a little more humane to the readers by showing her emotions. Brava!! I look forward to seeing what else you come up with luv - hopefully it will be soon like ye promised, yes? *grin* Ta for now luv!
person Neenie
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fake map? I wonder if Jack knows, and was using it as an excuse to get his crew to go with him to get his love? I'm very curious to see how this all comes out...and of course the "naughty bits"! Looking forward to more!
person blue magic
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey EvilEyedPirateGirl - SO happy to see you are writing your own story and it is wonderful!!!! My apololgies for being so late in reviewing - it has beenso difficult to get on that I havent read here for awhile. I think you are doing beautifully with Jack, and as you know that is from a very tough critic! Love how you've brought in the historical with Ann Bonny - just brilliant. I can't wait to read more!
person Angela Giovanni
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* This is the best PotC story I have ever read! Everyone is in character and we get a little history lesson to boot! *hugs tightly* very good! If i could eat this story I would! Now go! Hurry! Write more! NOW! *chains her to a desk* Write.... NOW!