AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Devil's Bride

by evileyedpirategrrl

person Anon
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story. Keep those chapters coming! Sounds like it's going to get more interesting as time goes by.
person becca
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good start! Love the storyline. Well written. Please continue!!!
person MahieSparrow
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That's so good! I hadn't read this fic yet because every time I come here I go directly to the Jack/Will part. ^__^ But this fic is awesome and I want to read more! Continue soon and if you can, add some threesome in it. ;) J/W/E is GREAT, though I'm crazy for Jack/Will mostly. Come on, write more for us!!
person Ani Sparrow
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM

That was good. I like the way you had the town turn against Will & Elizabeth, which not too many writers do, but it is more realistic. The only thing is, sex outside of marriage was a sin (and in the eyes of the church, still is), so they would have been doing wrong.
person nedea
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I like it already. Please continue. I want to see what they all get up to. As to sex before marriage, come on there pirates. Much fun.
person Neenie
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story...a different twist on how and why Will & Elizabeth join Jack. Looking forward to more!
person Ani Sparrow
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Hey, I like the sound of this - it pormises to be a good story. I like the way you paint a picture of the surroundings and situations. More, more!