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for First Hunger

by Anukk

person Tamura
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, that'll go over real well. if dracula can completely debase their master, they don't stand a chance. add in the fact that it IS dracula we're talking about and they're about to be wiped off the face of the planet. poor, poor sad vampires. and i don't imagine gabriel will take it lying down either. please continue. though if i may make a suggestion? your story is near perfect but there are a couple of grammatical errors, not so much mistakes but missing words.
person kiki
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*greadily reads all your fanfics* ...sooo~ addicting! *drool* such hotness...Mmmmm
person Cady
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleaz update

Or email the chapters to me.
person Dreamfool
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anukk,
i love your writing and story plots. they capture my attention like Vlad hold's Grabriel's. there is soo much charater and life to them. your use of discription is excellent and you keep true to the characters right down to their diallog. your a gifted writer and i have hung you in my shine of Van-Helsing fanfic authors.
however you do not have a shrine. i have yet to see a completed fic from you:( i understand it ccan befrustrating when you have writers block for the next, but a good way to get over it is to ask for suggestions from your fans. please finish some of your other stories. i grieve for their state of neglect.
person N.Springs
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pwease update soon. *puppy eyes* Pwease? XD Seriously, this is one of my favorite Van Helsing fics- Ya can't leave me hanging like this! Ahaha, Dracula is gonna kick some ignorant vampire butt, eh?
person FogWolf
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say... Please continue with this Fic, I love it, I like the way you're telling the story and the interaction between the charcaters and your own ones.
person louise
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, but exactly WHEN will it be continued!!!!!come on, plz continue, SOON!!!!
person Fiz
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!
person Carveus
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!
Absolutely loving all ten chapters and am eagerly awaiting your next update.
person God of Insanity
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update! Why don't more people review this fic? Its a great fic! Its an original idea, and its good! ^_^ I felt sorry for gabriel, and they it twisted around when dracula claimed he had showed lucien his place. So glad you updated. I hope to see more! ^^