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for Primal Instinct-Lesson Learnt

by blackink

person Bubblegym
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Preston is sooooooo hooked!!! and hot! Great stuff! Plese update soon! Look forward to seeing more!
person May
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh it's getting really good why did you stop!! Writers can be such bastards!! *not implying you or anything* LOL He's denying it but i think he's totallty infactuated *Come on update SOON!!*
person prastine
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holly Bimballs! That was delicious. Im usually all about build up to this yummy climax but what the hell? Lets get to it and start chapter 2!
person Nee
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, well done, the end was kind of sad, though. If you have time, another chapter would be great. So nice to see a story based on this film. It was a good one!
person Nice Work
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, please continue. It would be nice if the two of them have a relationship.
person Starsinger_Sorceress
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
W-O-W.
That was amazing! I see I'm not the only one who thought Preston was totally fuck-able;)
person Matinex
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shit is tht tht that's it!!!! Where's chapter two??? Come on you can't leave us hanging! Please update!!!!
person echidna
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gotta say i love the way you write. it's so intense, you can really see and feel what the characters are going through.

great job. ;)

are you planning on writing more? I really hope so. I'll be on the look out for more.

Echidna
person Wonderwoman
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bloddy Brilliant, my heart was fluttering all the way! Is there anymore? Please som some more!
person Bubblegym
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's how I like it hot hot hot! Love the story!