rate_review Reviews

I have just started reading King Arthur fanfiction, since i usually don't stray from from my Gundam Wing lair, and i read this fiction. While there is a good basic plot and development of character and story, there are issues with grammar and sentence flow. However, with time and practice (and a beta reader. heh, i need one too, i suck amazing at spelling and such) there can be much improvement and i would love to see the result of that. the review before this was crude and tactless, not to mention brutally cruel. It was not constructive in any way, and by far the most childish thing i have seen written so far on AFF. keep writing, and i want to see more!

dear who ever you are,

i love king arthur slash, so i thought: why don't i read this story

i have only one thing to say to you: you are without a doubt, the most
terrible writer ever known to menkind, do us all a favor and never
write again

sincerely
salazar

We're called BRITONS, not Britainhankhanks a bunch :)