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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harrumph...You lead me to expect a lil more than that...You had more fun pain in your other story "Power of the Sparrow"
--grumbles on way to read more--
--grumbles on way to read more--
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
verry good storie *claps and wistles* i loved it so much i give it 10 stars ^_________^
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snort* that was really good. Will was a little ooc, and Jack... he was pretty much kept in character actually. Good job, and a pretty funny story.
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yummy!
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. . .rather amusing to have Will take control of Jack. You did a good job starting the story off 'mid stride' then going back and explaining why Jack was in the predicament that he was in.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's very interesting indeed. Never read a fic in which the ending was Jack cumming. lol And I liked the way Will reacted and the dialogues. Nicely done!