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You gotta update for real this is a really good story and hate for it to just slowly get earsed from your computer so please please please update soon thank you for this really good story.

update sooon! i can't wait

THIS IS A GREAT FIC,
I LOVE IT

dont use that other's persons advice on killing off a character
your fic is absolutely terrific the way it is

Needs a bit more drama, like a death .. either one of the kids or Briseis herself.

ohhhhh. that is sooooooo gooood. Please keep up the fabulous work.

great story!!!!!!!!!!!!11

I've thoroughly enjoyed this. Definitely the best of all the Briseis/Achilles fiction I've read to date. You seem to stay very true to their personalities, but develop and evolve them in a realistic manner as well.

i am surprized that this stroy has no reviews! The first chapter is very well witten. I love the passion and feeling you show. The way you start the story and lead us on into the plot is very well done. I want to see what happens to the two lovers now. Off to read more..what fun!!!!

Yay! So he does not die. This story is getting better and better. I was id yid you would go the way of the movie but you did not. Now we shall see how the two lovers interact....I have to say your writing is very good. The story flows well and your descriptions are done in a way that the reader is able to see the setting ( a picture is put into my mind). And i love the feeling you give to each of the characters...it creates this relationship that the reader should have with the main characters. And i still can not believe you are not gettting reviews! People dont know a good writer when they see one i guess!