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for Whisper Your Weakness

by kayladie

person Jules
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARRRRGH!!! IT'S SO GOOD!!! HOW THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO SLEEP TONGHT WITH THIS ON MY MIND?! ARRR! WRITE FASTER!
person fdisk
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed! where did you get this streak of sadism from??? I thought I had some good Ideas for luke but... :D niiiice.

love the story! I've read it a few times now, it doesn't get boring - though I do want you to get more chapters up :)

Keep writing!
person Yanic
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is truly excellent!! Please Update soon I can't wait to see what happens. I can't stand the Luke torture!
person riam
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fuck, i realy hate your viktor character, i hope he dies very painfully.
Is luke going to be free soon?


seeya
person Mara Look-a-like
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have read all of you chapters so far. I just figured out how to review. I really like this story please update soon.
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. What to say? This is the first fic I have came across at this site that has made me want to leave a review. Even though I have only read the first three chapters and then skipped to the end and read the last three or four chapters, all I have to say is...you have one hell of a story here. This is probably one of the better stories I have had the fortune to run across on this site. Your portrayal of the Star Wars characters seem so right. I am going to have to go back and read the rest of the chapters when I have the time. Keep up the good work.

*Now for the fangirl part*
LIKE OMG!!!1!!!U R SO MEAN FOR STOPPING LIKE THAT!!1!!!POOR LUKE!!!!11!!!!SOMEONE SAVE HIM!!!!111!!!!
person Lurkz
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I had given up on finding a well written Luke/Mara fic and then my friend points out this one. Absolutely love it. I was crying when I thought Luke was dead and so ecstatic to discover he wasn't. I hope you're going to continue, I can't wait to find out what happens next. The characterizations are great, even those of the secondary characters which is a rarity in fan fic. Thanks for writing this, it made my night to read it.

~Lurkz
person Sithwitch13
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just... wow. This is definately the best thing I've read on here to date. You got the characterization spot-on, and show the human side of Luke and Mara so well. I was almost in tears when I thought Luke was dead, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for making my night.

-Sithwitch

PS: Thanks for including Wedge and Corran. Corran gets too little love :-P
person astrid
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! Update soon okay?
person Jade
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Mara/Luke fic I have ever read. The characters a believable, in character and wonderful. The story is fantastic, I love it. And you have to update it! Seriously. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat. :D