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Waaaaaah! Please tell me I'm not too late! I don't know when this was last updated, but I'm damn well hoping that it'll be updated again soon! What a great story! And, goodness knows, I love Luke Skywalker. I just hope this all unfolds well. From the way the story has gone, it doesn't look like I have much to worry about. Ooh- will Leia and Mara find Luke? Or will Luke bust out and kick Viktor's ass? (I'm not opposed to either idea, though I do think that the latter has its charms... Maybe I just want to see Luke up and running again. Or I just want to see Viktor's ass kicked... bwa.) I eagerly await your decision, O Exalted Author (I tend to bequethe such epithets on authors I like. Hope that's not an issue.) Can't wait! Many good vibes and grins,
Cherry!

Loved Chapter 20! Doesn't look so good for Luke - but at least now we know how Berdin's father died. And Mara lashing out at my boy Wedge!! Hmph! Wellllll - she'd just better apologize or ... hmm ... or, I won't like her very much. LOL Very good chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter!! :)

This is a review for your last chapter. I felt so sorry for Luke when that idiot tortured him, but it was lovely when he got strength from thinking of Mara :)
The Leia/Mara scene on the balcony was my fav, very well written.
Hope to see more of this fic soon, and I hope Luke's torture won't continue for long...

Absolutely love it. Can't wait for the next part. Can't stop re-reading the other parts, either. Yeah, I'm hooked.

What are you doing to my cute, lovable Farmboy?! Poor, Poor Luke. I really hate Viktor. I hope Mara is able to get her hands on that evil Doctor soon.

I really hope Luke was able to hear Mara's message to him. He really needs something to lift his spirits. I hope his friends find him soon so Luke and Mara can get back to knocking boots. :)

Great post!

~DMS~

Awww... that story of 'little Luke' was absolutely adorable. And of course, all L/M scenes were great. Gotta read on...

Hey! Another chapter - serves me right for not checking on this more frequently! Very interesting chapter. I loved the Leia and Mara interplay...very sweet! Now the Luke scenes are of course my favorite. The poor man! Tortured and left alone to wonder why...very angst ridden. Oh and I still don't like Berdin - you write the evil/madman character very well! I wonder how Luke was responsible for the death of Berdin's father??? Hmmm....nice cliff hanger. Looking forward to seeing another chapter soon! (I promise I'll check in more often.)

GGRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

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MORE!!!

just found this story, read through to chapter 19... must... have...MORE!

oh, btw, I really liked it. It's an excellently written piece of fic, with a very good story to it. could be part of the series if this bit wasnt so dark :)

Wonderful chapter! I am so glad you finally updated. I really hate Viktor Berdin! My poor Farmboy. I hope Mara finds him soon so we can get back to the wonderful smut! lol

Great job! I hope I see chapter 20 very soon!

~DMS~