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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! But you know it's not enough...:-)
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you have worked on the suspense, never would have though He was a psychotic because luke killed his father in some unfortunate accidnet or another. If you take as long to update again we might have to start picketing outside of your house, so... HURRY UP PLEASE!!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A story that I find suprisingly good. I hope for more later, and your right I dont think anyone actually belived he was dead, seemed really anticlimatic if he was.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kayladie, where are you?! I'm dying waiting for the next chapter! This story is just wonderful.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kayladie,
You should be proud - I usually don't cry - and it takes a really good story for me to admit it!!
Chapter 18 was very good. I'm interested to see where you're taking the Berdin character and to find out where his hatred of Luke stems from. And ew, ick!! Licking Luke's ear - Luke's repulsed feeling was felt all around! I'm afraid of what other icky actions might befall him from this psychotic "Doctor".
I don't foresee a quick rescue for Luke, but I am glad that the gang is now aware that it wasn't really Luke who died. I am curious to see how you explain the Luke double. Also - how did Berdin keep Luke subdued for so long - did he really blast him then heal him? Or is Luke still suffering from a blaster wound?
Typical Luke to worry about his family and them being worried about him. Also, it was right in character for him to worry about little Syal and his friend Wedge. Nice touch. But he needs to be worried about himself right now!
Looking forward to Chapter 19!!!
You should be proud - I usually don't cry - and it takes a really good story for me to admit it!!
Chapter 18 was very good. I'm interested to see where you're taking the Berdin character and to find out where his hatred of Luke stems from. And ew, ick!! Licking Luke's ear - Luke's repulsed feeling was felt all around! I'm afraid of what other icky actions might befall him from this psychotic "Doctor".
I don't foresee a quick rescue for Luke, but I am glad that the gang is now aware that it wasn't really Luke who died. I am curious to see how you explain the Luke double. Also - how did Berdin keep Luke subdued for so long - did he really blast him then heal him? Or is Luke still suffering from a blaster wound?
Typical Luke to worry about his family and them being worried about him. Also, it was right in character for him to worry about little Syal and his friend Wedge. Nice touch. But he needs to be worried about himself right now!
Looking forward to Chapter 19!!!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written, although I am not happy about Luke being tortured. I would hate to be Viktor when Mara gets her hands on him. I cannot wait until our two lovers are reunited. I hope it happens soon!! Great job!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! I knew it!!! Absolutely wonderful chapter - amazing that Mara would be the one to finally notice that it was not really Luke. Perfect having Talon and Han hanging back and watching over Mara. I can't wait to see where you're taking us next!!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I cannot wait for your next chapter. I hope its soon!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a toss up, actually, between fake!Luke and miraculously-comes-back-to-life!Luke ;)
Good update - a nice thing to come home to after a morning at work and an afternoon of shovelling snow. Brrrrrr.
Good update - a nice thing to come home to after a morning at work and an afternoon of shovelling snow. Brrrrrr.
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I love this!! Now I am happy!! You are such an excellent writer! I cannot get enough of this story. It is fantastic! Keep up the good work!!! I anxiously look forward to an update!!