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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's extremely well thought in the beginning and middle but I am sorry to say that the ending lacks that certain "je ne sais quoi". Please keep writing though.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
iv read menny jack/will fics but this one seemed more real ( realer? =P) i love it wonderful work
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So endering, I am in love with Jack and Will all over again! Thank you for that! I absolutely loved it!
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lillia AKA 1/2 of the PKmaniacs
(The Pyromaniac, if you're wondering)
okay...that was...i dont know...it was just...wonderful. the writing was done extremely well. it had a beat and smoothness to it that just made the story flow perfectly. the wording was great. i just...loved it. the ending was perfect. the idea was deep, and the way your wrote everything was quite fresh and original. the look into how and why will felt left out was great...it made complete sense and kept true to everyone's character, because i dont imagine elizabeth would be adventurous after her marriage. the way you explained the differences between the rich and the pirates, jack and elizabeth, how they felt for gold and beauty...i just found it deep and meaningful and i dont know...good. it was all very...perfect. i find no problems at all with it. awesome job. (sorry for drabbling, its early in the morning haha)
~Remember, fire is dangerous to those who dont play with it all the time~
(The Pyromaniac, if you're wondering)
okay...that was...i dont know...it was just...wonderful. the writing was done extremely well. it had a beat and smoothness to it that just made the story flow perfectly. the wording was great. i just...loved it. the ending was perfect. the idea was deep, and the way your wrote everything was quite fresh and original. the look into how and why will felt left out was great...it made complete sense and kept true to everyone's character, because i dont imagine elizabeth would be adventurous after her marriage. the way you explained the differences between the rich and the pirates, jack and elizabeth, how they felt for gold and beauty...i just found it deep and meaningful and i dont know...good. it was all very...perfect. i find no problems at all with it. awesome job. (sorry for drabbling, its early in the morning haha)
~Remember, fire is dangerous to those who dont play with it all the time~