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Great ending!Really loved the story! Congratulations! Keep writing!


LightYears

Sort of short chapter but I liked it! Keep writting...I can't wait to see where(or when) Kirill will show up next...

Good Luck

LightYears

Yep...you can keep writing this-it's great! And you managed to put humour in it too!!! Way to go!!
Anyways... go on...I wanna see where this leads!

Light Years

Can I give you a sugestion? It's about the order of thapthapters:it gets kind of confusing (unless I'm following the story wrong, which is possible). The way I see it is that first chapter is under the name "Prey", second chapter is under the name "A Second Confrontation (Prey Part 2) ", but the third is again under the name "Prey" and the fourth under " A Second Confrontation (Prey Part 2)". I always check both stories for update. Can you change that and put it under a single title please?Or is this your intention?(if so, let me know :)

Thanks and once more, congratulations on this great story

Light Years

Man this is good. More!!! More!!!!

This is great!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter !!!