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for Blue Flames and Old Scars

by livingdeadgirl

person dc4168
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
person Annonymouse
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's an aww story kids. The whole, aww that's sweet thing. Yeah. I especially love the inexplicable, random enters at the end. Very nice.
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"That's not a scar, that's my nipple.".. I thought that was pretty funny for some reason. Hehe..

It was an okay story, considering not seeing the movie, but yeah, I don't think Red would act like that nor Liz.
person enya of nexcuss
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I THOUGHT YOUR/RE STORY WAS COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL! I HOPE U HAVE PLANNED TO WRIT ANOTHER HELLBOY FIC

UNTILL THEN SEEYA
person Sapphira
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable! There's not nearly enough H/L smut out there... thanks for sharing!!
person Ninnik
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

To use one of the clichés-- I am completely in love with your 'Blue Flames and Old Scars'.
You've paid attention to all the little details that make up Liz and Red and elaborated on them perfectly, which gives your story great credibility and it has this sorta real feel to it. Maybe you've watched the DVD bonus material, eh?
Heart-wrenching rendition of HB's inner turmoil, I must say, and how you show Liz's affection for him is just spot on.
This story was adorable, sad, happy, funny, dramatic and sexy all at once, and that's a great thing to be able to achieve. Go, Kora!
Bottom line-- I don't think I'll be writing the smutfic for Liz and HB that I was contemplating, because you just painted the perfect picture of their first time, and it included everything
that I'd figured their first time should have, every emotion, every fear and every happy moment, and every steamy little, toe-curling description-- steamy, yet never, ever tasteless.

Great work!

Ninnik

PS: Read another one called Planes of Red, and as much as I loved that one, the author had chosen to give our hero a half-stone penis-- which sounds downright painful if you ask me. What was that all about?
person Ivy
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! You nailed the characterizations right on the head! I just love Red-- big, ugly, and a total pussycat! Look forward to reading more from you!

Ivy
person Captain Yuzuki
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I loved this. It's good 2 c others writing Hellboy stories. I was the fourth and you' re the fifth. Awesome plot! Write more, please!