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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummmm it was really quick but what the hell! i liked it!!!!! i honestly thought it was good!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that. was bad.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Too short rushed and it seems... just not right, I suppose. Well, practice makes perfect.
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awful, just awful. Anakin's upset so Padme just starts to strip? There's no pacing, everything is rushed. Motives aren't explained. The sex is juvenile and pornish. Maybe you can improve but I'm seriously doubting it.