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for One Little Mistake

by solytayre

person Olmm
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tis excellent but I want to know how could achilles die by being stabbed in the heart if he's invincible, except for his heel? I know you say tis AU but >< I can't seem to grasp that idea...Tis a very sweet story, though...brought tears to my eyes
person midnighteyes
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story keep it up!!!!!!!!!
person Fire
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good. Be pleased, i havent given anyone the honour of writing a review. Your story was so good. paris was fantastic as was Achilles. Very realistic.
One thing, Cassandra was twin of Helenus, not Paris.
xxxx
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man! This is absolutely dark and sexy as hell! I love your portrayal of Paris. I find him brave, noble and tragic. Even though he was victimized, he never acted like a victim. The ending of this story is a whopper! I enjoyed it very much! Keep up the good writing!
person Thalionwen
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing tale you have wrought!. worthy, indeed, of a Greek Tragedy... Thank you.
person Jenzila
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? WHAT? DEAD? Nooooooooooo!!! *wail* But the story was great! *does happy Kirby dance* <( '.' )> ~ (> '.')> ~ <('.' <) ~ <( '.' )> *wheeee!*