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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. I always knew the Phantom was a lovely man.
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really hot! I loved Erik's innocence. That made things so much hotter!
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December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story sooo much it was sweet and loving and a little bit steamy and the great attributes of a fantastic story ^_^
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for letting me know my fic had disappeared. Its fixed now.
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i dont kno what going on but i cant read it....*pout*
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh... Yum!
Enjoyed it very much, thank you! I prefer Gaston Leroux's Erik myself (with Michael Crawford's take a close second!) but it's always fun to read other takes on him too.
(Wasn't Phantom a good book?)
One suggestion I would make
Enjoyed it very much, thank you! I prefer Gaston Leroux's Erik myself (with Michael Crawford's take a close second!) but it's always fun to read other takes on him too.
(Wasn't Phantom a good book?)
One suggestion I would make
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
*bows* Thank you for your lovely dedication, my dear :) Glad to see it up where everyone can enjoy it. Your obedient servant, PMEL
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Greetings,
This is such a splendid Phantasy. Look forward to reading more of your works.
This is such a splendid Phantasy. Look forward to reading more of your works.
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
It is an interesting and well-written story. The only major complaint I have is Erik calling "Oh God!" and "Sweet Jesus!". He wouldn´t do that. He stopped believing in God when Father Mansard told him that his dog´s soul´wouldn´t go to Heaven. So it´
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
You asked for constructive criticism so here it is. This is NOT a flame by any means. Your writing is good - punctuation, grammer, etc., however the story itself is VERY rushed. A couple of points then. Jenny_Wren is correct, unless you put a disclaimer o