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by PhoenixXxCat

person Cecilia
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

Did you fall off the face of the earth? Where's the update, woman? I may be the only one reviewing this story, but I happen to think that there's alot of potential here! I don't want to rush you or anything, but get going! I have to know what's going to happen next!

C.
person Cecilia
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that this is a fab story! A little far fetched, especially the part when Cat smacks Smith delicious ass. I think that movie Smith would have put a bullet between her eyes, but hey this is fan fiction, and with fan fics we can do whatever the hell we want with the characters we love! Love the fact that your lead female is a Latina! I'm a Latina too, so I can totally identify with Cat. Keep up the good work, hope to see an update soon (with some smutty sex scenes, por favor).


C.