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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story since chapter one and I have to say the ending was quite intense. Very good work!
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, beautiful! And so heavy! And so very understandable and reasonable! Thankyou so much for this beautiful story. I love it!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally! This chapter was a lot less sad than the last ones, and very enjoyable indeed. Thanks L. :-)
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My oh my! He´s evil allright, and her fate... It kills me!
Thankyou for another exciting chapter/ Nic.
Thankyou for another exciting chapter/ Nic.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I have to review again. I´m heartbroken, for her, for their child, for Jones and even for Smith... And I´m so in to this story, it´s so exciting!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am totally stunned by this story! I´ve stayed up way too late several nights in a row now to read it. I finished ch 25 last night and found to my surprise and joy ch 26 today! Keep up the excellent work. Have you written anything else? Here or at some other site?
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. You have such a powerful gift to convey deep emotion. Bronwyn's inner conflict about her feelings for Jones and Smith was insightfully written, a job well done. I bow down to you, m'lady. Keep the chapters coming!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! Encore! *whistles and applause* You've blown me away! You've done a great job with the encounter between "father and son". The two of them are such arrogant bastards, and you've managed to capture that aspect of their personalities perfectly.
GREAT JOB!!!! Keep it coming!
GREAT JOB!!!! Keep it coming!
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH - MY- GOD!!!!! More, you must write more! That last part about Smith actually "feeling" what was going on between Jones and Bronwyn was the icing on the cake! This is the supremely best chapter you've written!
BTW: Tell the Orcale that I want chocolate chip cookies this time!
The movies were Men in Black (how appropriate) and Die Hard.
You Know Who!
BTW: Tell the Orcale that I want chocolate chip cookies this time!
The movies were Men in Black (how appropriate) and Die Hard.
You Know Who!