schedule
January 14, 2024 at 12:00 AM
Hell nah! His "people" are whoever the fuck he chooses, ma'am. That means Vaako is his people, too. I'm unhappy with Mother Soryn...
schedule
March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh beautiful story that I love to see Riddick decides to take the kids and the best thing always Vaako would live together and congratulate you for this love story.
schedule
May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very much liking this fic. Vaako is a bit stronger here than in other stories and I like that. Riddick sounds very much like Riddick. Looking forward to reading the rest of this.
schedule
March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading chapter 5 and I must say I like the slow build up, how Vaako and Riddick don't just jump in to bed right away.
I also like how you're slowly changing the necros, showing what they're missing. It gives the story more substance and makes it more believable.
And definately more enjoyable ^-^
I also like how you're slowly changing the necros, showing what they're missing. It gives the story more substance and makes it more believable.
And definately more enjoyable ^-^
schedule
March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well... When the sex finally happened in chapter 6, you'd think it would be all over and done with.
Luckily it isn't ^-^
The trip to Furyan was nicely timed; the way you started foreshadowing a few chapters beforehand so it doesn't pop out of nowhere and make it seem forced (like you don't want the story to end yet and just made something up). The story continues on nicely and smoothly ^-^
Now I have to wonder what problems will crop up... A Furyan mate for Riddick? Someone to take out Vaako while Riddick is away?
MUST READ MORE!!
Luckily it isn't ^-^
The trip to Furyan was nicely timed; the way you started foreshadowing a few chapters beforehand so it doesn't pop out of nowhere and make it seem forced (like you don't want the story to end yet and just made something up). The story continues on nicely and smoothly ^-^
Now I have to wonder what problems will crop up... A Furyan mate for Riddick? Someone to take out Vaako while Riddick is away?
MUST READ MORE!!
schedule
March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Augh! You can't do this to Vaako and Riddick!! >_< It's cruel to rip them apart! For all we know the whole prophesy could be the furyans plot to tie Riddick to them and have his babies! Vaako, don't trust them!!
Nicely done, by the way ;D
Nicely done, by the way ;D
schedule
March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, must you hurt Vaako so? It makes my heart ache for him... And that's pretty good considering they aren't even "real" people...o.0
The Mother is a bitch. She should just take herself elsewhere with her scheming and half-baked match-making.
The Mother is a bitch. She should just take herself elsewhere with her scheming and half-baked match-making.
schedule
March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yayness! Victory!!
Now the bitch mother has no right to interfere ^-^ And Riddick shall be Vaako's forever!! Muhahhahhaa!!
*coughs*
It was nicely written. Especially the smut. And I liked that while completing the binding ritual they couldn't reach climax until Vaako spoke the last words :) It was a very nice touch ^-^
Oh, and the girl who saw Vaako was a furyan, was very cute ^-^
Now the bitch mother has no right to interfere ^-^ And Riddick shall be Vaako's forever!! Muhahhahhaa!!
*coughs*
It was nicely written. Especially the smut. And I liked that while completing the binding ritual they couldn't reach climax until Vaako spoke the last words :) It was a very nice touch ^-^
Oh, and the girl who saw Vaako was a furyan, was very cute ^-^
schedule
March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oaaws, Riddick and Vaako have a pet ^-^ And a cute and dangerous one at that. Now all that's missing is that they adopt Rayna and Trey :) Vaako seems to be suprisingly good with children ;)
The smut was once again... Brain melting :)
The smut was once again... Brain melting :)
schedule
March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happiness looks good on Vaako and Riddick ^-^
And I'm happy the deal with the Phantoms is starting to be behind us so that Riddick may go and rule and Vaako can be his spouse ^-^
Who needs battles when you have happiness on your fingertips?
...Well, Riddick might, but we'll arrange him someone to spar with him safely, so that he won't have to get hurt and that way hurt Vaako :)
And I'm happy the deal with the Phantoms is starting to be behind us so that Riddick may go and rule and Vaako can be his spouse ^-^
Who needs battles when you have happiness on your fingertips?
...Well, Riddick might, but we'll arrange him someone to spar with him safely, so that he won't have to get hurt and that way hurt Vaako :)