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for Just the Beginning

by rainbowbrite

person vinchildy
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. riddick and vaako was hot!hot!.
person :)
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you, my little love bunny
person :)
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
in part 5 it seems to jump from the social gathering to vaakos past, without really flowing. I don't know if this was the intention or if there have been problems with the site to cause this, so if you could fix i would actually be in love with you cause this is the best fanfic i have ever read
person .
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story
person Andante
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really enjoyed this story. I love how you wrote Vaako and Riddick, and I love the direction and pace you took with their relationship. You also intertwined an intriguing plot line along with the love story. This story had a beautiful ending but I really hope you will continue it in a sequel. Wonderful piece!
person silver_sun
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To Ryuuza, my actually reasons for getting rid of the hair are much simpler. Vaako's hairstyle just annoyed the crap out of me. ;D But, Vaako's hair grows back in the story, and you can check out the actor who plays him with short hair at http://www.karl-urban.com. Happy reading! :)
person Emily
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So thats the End........wow what a journey.........god your story is like epic man. i loved every bit of it!! R u going to write a sequel? I could so see Riddick playing daddy to his tow kids lol with Vaako as the good little house wife *Starts laughing*
Man i am too easily amused.
Luved it all chica
!!eMIlY!!
person Ryuuza
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why did you shave his head?!?!?! aaaahhhh my eyes. x_x i can see that you were try ing to link V's shaving of the head to Riddick's at the beginning of the movie but V looks bad with one. Dont try to link like that. I think we have suffucent linkage with the fact that Kyra is dead, R is head and V is in the picture.
person Emily
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* ohhhhh yay yay you wrote another chappy that is sooooooo good....and i luv it too.
I can't wait for the next one......gwad Vaako and Riddick r sooooo hot
Neway i luv ur writing chica and i can't wait until the next update :)
Have a good holiday
!!eMIlY!!
person Emily
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!
this is sooooo the BEST fic ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I absolutely love it man it is sooo awesome. The plot, the bonding, the pair, the giant cat thingy. It just all Rocks. And your smut scenes are worthy of goddess status. YOU ROCK MAN!!!! I CANNOT wait until the next chapter!!!
Love It Goddess
!!eMIlY!!