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for Just the Beginning

by rainbowbrite

person Dhlloran Vaelduchi
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love this whole story, very well written, wish it was the script for the next movie. Continuing this will make alot of fans exstatic. Take care and good reading...
person Verwelkenden
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the 11th chapter! As I've already said about in every post, I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a beautiful story you've got going.
~Ver
person zakhyn
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. more--definitely more as soon as you are able.
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schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love the twist this story has taken. And once more, as I've said so many times, I can't for the coming chapters. You've got a real talent for writing and I want to see more of it. Keep up the great work, and thanks for keeping us on the edge!
~Ver
person duchess
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a really well put together story, and i love Riddick/Vaako, great pairing!

Update soon, this is a great fic!
person Bea
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Riddick/Vaako is hard to come by. And your's is not only good, it's really great. I stumbled about it and read it in one go! Please continue, please,please *makes puppy-dog-eyes* It's a gorgeous story.
person Lysan
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Vaako. I have to wonder now... just how far would Mother Soryn be willing to go to make sure that there is no hinderance to her desire of a Furyian mate for Riddick?

I'm really enjoying this fic. Please keep up the wonderful story telling.
person Verwelkenden
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o_o I am falling more and more in love with this story! I can NOT wait for the ninth chapter! o_o Vaako!
person Verwelkenden
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Usually when I read fanfiction on here I'm expecting a whole lot mut.mut. I have to say, you've proved me wrong on that one! I love the way you've explained everything in this fanfic, and that you just didn't jump to sex; and the fact that at the end of each chapter I'm waiting for the next. Thanks a lot for writing such a great one! I can't wait for the next chapter!
~Ver
person GB
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You do plan on continuing this right? I really hope so because I'm just loving this. You have no idea. I'll be checking back up later. Got to go. BYE-BYE!!

~*Gothic Bianca*~