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for They Wrote WHAT?!

by Pagan

person bob
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful. I kept laughing at Obi-Wan. Write more stories like that please! They're very very good!
person sapphirexkat2
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kind of offensive, but funny as hell.
person Hanuko Youkai
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was hysterical. I was laughing my ass off! I actually started reading that one where Obi-wan is pregnant, and once it said he was I ran away, screaming bloody murder. This was absolutely wonderful, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. There were some technical errors, but that doesn't affect the content of your story. I loved it and highly recommend it.
"I have no ovaries. How exactly am I supposed to get pregnant without those?" ~sniggers~
And I will finish this review off with this last comment.
Poodoo?
person duckmasta2020
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KICK ASS!!!! do another chapter!!!
person Rebecca
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Briallant! I needed the laugh!
person tyrj
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! THAT IS TOO FUNNY!
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to make a second part to this piece! It had me falling out of my chair laughing hysterically. Wonderfully done! (what about the Jedi Council?)
person Lililorelei
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read this thing like, six times over and it isn';t any less funny. VERY humorous. Congratulations on being able to make fun of all this kind of stuff! Especially in yourself. Some of those suggestions, though, were REALLY disturbing, I must say. . .

*mumbles*Anakin and Yoda???*
person mmmm... annakin
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAha... that was funny please write more
person CherryCoke
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was really funny; poor Obi-Wan...both of them! hehehe I can't really think of any critisizm for this story, so great job there! Maybe, hopefully, I'll see something else from you soon!