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This story is laughable. I mean that sincerely: throughout every sex scene, I was giggling in embarrassed amusement. Embarrassed not because of the context but the quality of writing. "... he managed to push his digits inside. His success was awarded with a muffled squawk." Oh yeah, baby, that's unbelievably sexy. Angsty, too, since it was a rape scene. Anyway, whoever suggested that you do not bother with this story was right. Better yet, find a hobby other than writing altogether. This ain't your strong suit.

OMG, that was just too beautiful. It took me two days to read this and I found myself sad to see it end. I'm not going to even lie, tears trickled down my face once I learned what Paris did. I always knew his lover would die, but in the back of my head I kept hoping and wishing they could go back home, in the bedchambers with the young slave boy that Paris took in as a friend. You are a damn good writer and this fic touched my heart more than any fic on this whole site and maybe more than any story I've ever read. It's just so sad to see this end on such a sad note...but you have done an extremely good job writing this and I thank you for taking me on this journey that made me laugh, made me cry and made me hott for Brad Pitt and Orlando Bloom. Thank-You

Jackie_Boi

A very enjoyable read, i thank you.

A happy/sad ending, very good

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JEDI_BANT

Oh, Red! *sob* Just read it again and I have tears in my eyes. I can show emotion because I'm not at work LOL! This is an absolutely moving, heartwrenching story and I'm so sad to see it go! Please promise me you'll writer another one! I really wish Paris and Achilles had been able to be together in the end, but when I think about it, they are truly together where no sadness or pain can ever touch them again. I applaud you and give you a standing ovation!

my back and eyes hurt because I read all 27 chapters in one sitting. yes, ONE sitting. Ow!

but it was worth it. IS worth it. this story is so good. truly a work of art. I was rivetted from the first to the last chapter. the last chapter made me cry, btw. oh hector! I just want to reach out and comfort and tell him that his wee paris will be alright.

i'm having a rheumatism/astigmatism bout and I'm crying. that's how great I think this is.

So, now, I hope you update soon. I'm still recuperating but, yeah, I wouldn't mind sitting through another 27 chapters of this fic. ;)

More! Please, please, please?

I must say that I love this story. It had me want to know more after each chapter and even got me crying during some parts. I can't wait till you ass more and I'll be on the look out for when you next update. So please update really soon.

Cara

OMG Paris please come back your brother misses you

This is a really good story.. Really written well.. I love how the story is going...

YOU ROCK!!!!!!...Paris Angst is ALWASE the best^^...kekek...
is SOOOO LOVING thid fic...and i cant wai to see whats gonna
happen in the next chapters^^

Poor Paris! His father is going to see what has been done to him as he hangs his head in shame! He needs some love and TLC! Yes, I am a sap. Achilles needs to come and get him and take him far away where he will be loved and safe! I definitely needed my kitty to cuddle for this one (some people use a stuffed animal, I use my kitty, though not always to her liking!) Red Autumn, I love your work and can't wait to read more!