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poor paris
Hector will help you

Paris escape into Troy and get Hector

AWESOME STORY!

Whee! More chapters! You cannot write crap ever! I love everything you write! I just want to go up to Paris and cuddle him and take care of him, but I have a feeling that is long in coming, judging from the recent scene with his enemy! Keep writing more and I'll keep reading!

Wow. How Graphic... but its really well-written. Can Neo-what's-his-name die?? PLEASE. Lol. PLEASE update soon!!!

Well it's a good story,but damn it's freaking dark-do you hate paris or something. I mean personally i liked to bash in that neo guys head-is some good luck going to finally come paris way. Because the way this story going-not that it isnt good-is a little to harsh for me. I hope to see the next cchapter soon.

love it

I thought I'd give you a review here as well as on the Yahoo group. This is one painful yet fantastic piece of literature. Your words and descriptions invoke so many feelings in me as a reader and it's as though I'm there with Paris and Achilles throughout each and every chapter, watching as events unfold which they cannot control and which threaten to tear them apart forever. Your latest was no exception. Achilles needs to save Paris, whose soul is being torn asunder by the evil men to whom he is forced to pleasure. I am eagerly awaiting your next installment!

-Masquerade

please will someone save Paris

yay an update! when you said you wouldnt be updating till the first few days of march i nearly died! plz update soon, i love this story. where are y ou achillies?