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much more realistic than any other alien human pairings i always found it hard to believe that a creature that had acidic blood wouldn't have other corrosive body fluids

After reading the entire thing, I realised how appropriately wicked the title is. I was completely gobsmacked by the ending, but even so, this was an absolute beauty to read, the first couple of lines completely blew me away with the imagery:

In the metal rafters above, a sliver of night flitted between the beams of steel, braiding itself with the shadows. Thick, gelatinous strings of saliva swung from the creature’s lower jaw, spattering the metal grating beneath. Silently making its way through the rafters, the alien hissed in mirth at its fortune.

Just wonderful writing there.

I know this is a one-shot, but I hope you continue with something similar in the future.

Very good. And here I thought it was only their blood that was acidic...suppose this solves the mystery of why they prefer disposable hosts.

very erotic

PLEASE! WRITE MORE! You wont believe how hard it is to find Xeno sex seens with people and this is so well written.
~Anti~

Did I tell you I LOVE this piece? It's one of the best PWP's ... ever... And I keep cumming back to it again and again... :grins:

Nic.

This was disturbing. You're a perv for writing it and I am a total perv for enjoying it. GOOD JOB.

I enjoyed that very much. Xenophilia rox me sox.

That was... really hott LOL may I make a request? Can you make a story with an human/alien actual love story, I know it sounds weird and dumb but humor me here, imagine if a human and a male alien like, let's say a young praetorian? Or a predalien ^_^ or ah why not, a King alien LOL fall for each other and have repeated steamy hott sex! WOOT! LOL don't mind me...

i saw this story once........ cant remenber when....... well im not gona ask, or beg for update if it is what your thinking.... im just giving a information... that i think that you would apreciate. their making a alien 5,"not the alien vs predator" but a sequal from the quadroligy. their thinking on exploring a more darker facts of the alien. yes, thats right your story fits in that dark part, the 4 alien movie.. was perfectely insinuating what all the fans were thinking. maybe in a future you will have competition. and belive if they want to make money thats the only way and to make people see it, i have read plenty of fanfics like that.