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by EbonyMoonlight

schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(whistles) Damn you have a twisted sense of humor! Reminds me of me ^_^ INTERESTING title for this...I especially liked the commentary at the end. I applaud your description and detail. I can just imagine Ripley walking in on THAT little spectacle...heh heh.
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wanted to know who the hell would write a story like this. i intended to just critiscize, but then i read it. *blink* my mind is scarred for life! *pictures a human being boiled/melted (whatever u call it, leave me be, i only had 20 minutes of sleep)* *shudders* ew...
person Draculella
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Normally I like wierd pairings-specially with aliens and tentacles as something a little funky. This was good but all I could think at the end was...SQUIK!
person Anonymous
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. You should continue it as a series.
person Smijey
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was saddened that the woman did not find true love and happiness with the alien.
person anni
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um... its very squirmy and i was wigged out enough that after like months i ad to come back and read it again and write this thing to tell you how wiggy it was. good job!
person rrytuf
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Anon
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I mean really...wow. That's disturbed. Ok, I'm disturbed for looking for this sort of fanfiction - but you are disturbed to the tenth zillion for writing it! Hehehe, good on you mate.