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for Of Revenge and Shattered Dreams

by JennyPugh

person Killer Kadoogan
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great wedding! And I loved the rat! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'Ello, Poppet! Bloody brilliant, dear! Always you keep us coming back for more! Will Jack really retire or won't he? Stay tuned for the stunning conclusion! You always surprise me, just when I think I know where you're going with this you start a new path! Good show, old girl!!! Happy writing, chica! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K :)
person dramaced
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, I go off for a few weeks and come back to find all bloody hell's broken loose: the baby killed, Valentine & Richard killed, Gillette killed... my god, woman, blood everywhere!!! When Valentine went for Jenny, I cried out "NOOO!" so loud I woke up my sleeping daughter. Well written, though, every bloody paragraph... I'm so sad for Jack and Jenny, so proud of Patience, and just can't imagine what you'll come up with next. WOW!
person lexie
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapters! Keep it up!
Now that you have mentioned Jack's age, exactly how old are he and Jen?
person PirateAurora
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great testament to your writing is your ability to trigger emotion and I was set back on my heels by the last few chapters. I can appreciate Jenny's despair and I'm looking forward to watching them heal together, hopefully even more closely then before. Ironically, my baby's name was Jack! Keep writing please.
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola, Chicquita! Jolly good update,dearie! I was glad to see Luke back. Get Jenny well soon, por favor! Tengo que irme! Salud! Your loyal reader, Killer K :)
person lexie
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I'm soo happy that this was a happy chapter!
Good Points-
1. Jenny's rescue (of course!)
2. Gillette's death
3. Luke joining the ship
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!!! How could you, you heartless wench?! Girl, that was perfectly tragic! Oh, where do you go now? Does this mean Jenny will be back aboard the Pearl? I can not imagine the pain poor Jenny is feeling- please go easy on here for awhile! Have to admit you got me that time. Just keeps us comin' back for more, eh? Good job, deary. Depressing, but as always right on the mark. May you wallow in the angry glares and horrified gasps of your readers- for awhile anyway. You shall have to make this up to us! Maybe 2 new chapters VERY soon. Yes, that would be nice. Happy and productive writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud! A sad and sulking Killer K :( JGEL
person lexie
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..........................!

YOU KILLED HIM! GRRRRRRR......
person lexie
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that that's out of my system.. Glad Valentine's dead and Jack shouldn't have promised to spare that horrible man...