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*wipes away tears* As tempted as I am to flame you...*points a shaking finger at you* That was one of the saddest things I've read... *bursts into tears* ...that was both horribly tragic and oddly beautiful. *rubs eyes* Really, darling, I'm at a loss for words.

Wonderful chapter. Keep it up.

*sniffs*
*Kat

I realized after reading the latest chapter, that I don't believe I've ever commented on your story, even though I've been following it and anxiously awaited updates from the very beginning. Great story, the three separations could really be split into three novels even! You have so many great ideas and inventions in your plot... Just keep writing (esp. this story!! haha)

Woo scantily clad Jack! *does snoopy dances* I'm so worked up I can hardly type here. Lol. GREAT Chappy! Glad to see Shay and Patience gettin' serious. *wiggles brows* And Jenny's lookin' near popping stage. Yay for soon to be born twins! I can't wait to see what Jack will be like during labor. *falls over laughing* Anyways. I KNOW Valentine is lurking somewhere, and I suspect you doing the trick of, let everyone forget about him a bit, make him not as pressing of a threat, and then STRIKE! But I haven't forgotton! The bastard is just lurking about waiting for Jack to leave, I know it! Hm. I suppose I can forgive you for the lack of chapter this Sunday, given there was extremely scantily clad Jack in this chappy (thank you very much!) and Jack/Jenny yumminess. Can't wait for the next chapter! Many good things in store! *dances*

As always, Jack+Jenny+Sex=TWINS!

LOVES! and Merry ChristmaHanuKwanzicas!

*Kat

Well, just finished Chapter 17 and I have two things to say:
First, well done as usual and once again you've included some enticing mystery--this time regarding Patience...
Second, until reading this chap I had longed to be a musical instrument...namely Johnny Depp's guitar. But now I think I'd also rather enjoy being Jack Sparrow's drum... on the beach, in the sand, between Jack's legs, rum sloshing and hemp burning...now what a lovely time that'd be!! Yo ho, yo ho, indeed.

Ah, wouldn't we all like to wake up Christmas morning to find Jack Sparrow under our tree!!! Way to go, Santa! What a sweet chapter! I dread when Jack and Jenny are parted, it will be so sad. Why can't I find a dashing pirate captain to whisk me away to a beautiful island?! Now I shall sulk quietly........OK I'm feeling some better now. Any whoo, another great chapter and always looking forward to the next. Wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a great New Year! Let us know if you get your gift-wrapped Jack(if you get one and I don't I will be soo mad!). Feliz Navidad, mi chica! Killer K JGEL ;p

YAY! I love parties!
But it makes me sad that Jenny and Patience will be leaving the Pearl...
(I dont think Patience is too sad, though...) lol
Keep up the fabulous writing!

Wee! LONG Chappie! I love it. ^.^ *dances* Yay, I win! I'm psychic! Thank you, love, for more scantily clad Jack! The party was lovely, and it was really...charming just to see everyone so relaxed. I'm getting a bit nervous about the lack of report on Valentine. *looks around**looks in the bushes**looks up in the trees* I know he's around somewhere. *pokes about* But I don't know where. *growls* Anyways! Love to here about the yumminess with Shay and Patience, and Jack and Jenny, as always, make me get giggly. GREAT chapter, and I hope you have a wonderful Christmahanukwanzicah! and a Happy New Year!

*loves*
Kat

P.S. Jack+Jenny+Bunk=Pregnancy=Twins=1 BOY AND 1 GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^ Or, of course, whichever sex you decide THIS child to be, the next one can be opposite. ^.^ So if you HAVE to not make it twins, I'm rooting for a....boy. *nods*

*loves*

Good chapter, but perhaps it's the calm before the storm?? Looking forward to more so rest up and write!!

Great updates! What a great way to break in a new house! I hate the thought that Jack will have to leave Jenny soon, though. Keep up the writing, chica! Buenos tardes! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K JGEL:)

Just finished reading the last 3 new chapters and they were great!!! I'm suspecting perhaps that there's going to be something terribly exciting happening? That Valentine - if he upsets my favourite couple, I'll shake my fist at him!!! I will I swear. Keep writing please. I love your stories - they save me from dreary days.