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Oh, for heavens sake don't make Jenny have twins!!!! Nothing kills the romance faster then 2 screaming babies with dirty nappies. Please let Jenny keep her sanity and Jack his lover.

Ooooo! Short, but smutty! I LOVE IT! ^.^ Glad to see Patience and Shay gettin' along nicely. ^.^ Love the Jack/Jenny interactions. *snuggles them* They're so cute. Again, a great chapter. I can't wait to get a visual of the furnished houses. I'm curious as to what will happen when Jenny and Patience go to buy furniture. Perhaps a kidnapping? I know Valentine's gotta be around somewhere. *looks in the bushes* Anyhow, great chappy, again. Can't wait for more! And, AS ALWAYS, Jenny+Pregnancy=TWINS! ^.^
*loves*
Kat

^.^ Oh, one more thing! My review of last chapter went like this:

"I think that Jack should take his shirt off >.> Wouldn't that be nice?"

That happened in this chappy! Woo! Thanks!

"Ofcorse, I'm anxious for a description of the houses, some shamless smut, or plot action!"

Hey! 2 out of 3 of those happened! Yay! I win!

Well, just wanted to say THANKS! if ya did that on purpose, and if not, (since i know you pre-write the chappies) I'M PSYCHIC!

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The Fragrance Isles seem like a great place for Jenny and Patience. I hope that Jenny had twins! And I hope that the bailiff doesnt give them any trouble! Keep up the great work!

Oooooo. Very nice! *grins* I think that Jack should take his shirt off >.> Wouldn't that be nice? *gets lost into dirty fantasies* So yeah! Great chappy, love! Can't wait to read another! This one seemed a bit short. *pout* Ofcorse, I'm anxious for a description of the houses, some shamless smut, or plot action! Or Jenny's twins. You are considering making Jenny have twins, right? *evil smirk* Hm, yes. Positively can't wait for the next chappie, and will have to go off and content myself with reading the new Shay/Patience chapter! Which is coming along nicely, by the way. Well, keep it up darlin', and many dirty Jack dreams to ya!

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Kat

Nice chapter! It's nice to see a bit more depth to Patience, as opposed to the normal 'hellcat' image. ^.^ I'm also glad to see that they've reached Isle de Muerta. That means the action should be starting soon. As always, I'm still voting for twins! ^.^ Write more soon, and I can't wait for the next installment of the Shay/Patience story!!!

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Kat

`Nother great chapter! I like the Barbossa connection. And it's cool that Jack and Patience are gellin'. Never get so discouraged that you want to just quit the story- it's too good to be left unfinished! I know it must be time consuming, but you should know that all your loyal readers truly appreciate the effort. OK, enough mushy stuff! Update soon, mi chica! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K JGEL :)

Please don't be mad Ani! You know we love you even if sometimes it isn't said. And we love Jack and Jenny too. Ok, especially Jack. REALLY LOVIN' Jack. Thank you for the chapters I always look forward to them and truly appreciate your work. Please continue with your wonderful story.

hey. great story. i just read "what jack sparrow wants" last week and now im all caught up. i love all three stories in the series, but im a bit confused by the last chapter. did shay and patience have sex or no? please let me know and keep up the great work!

OK! OK! Here's your frickin' review! Just kidding! I know reviews are encouraging and help keep the writing coming. I, too, found your latest chapters quite funny! Poor Jack! I believe he has met his match in Patience. And I'm glad Shay has found some love- I'm rooting for the Irishman, having ancestry from Ireland(hard to believe if you could hear my Southern drawl-pure Scarlett O'hara I'm afraid). Really excited to see where you're going with your story and I'm thoroughly enjoying your new characters. One greviance- make Jack's wound better! I fell so sorry for him! If you don't I shall insult you like a Frenchman! I will give you a little taste of my wrath if you don't do as I say-` Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberries!...... Now, go away or I shall taunt you a second time!' If you don't know what that's from you can not call yourself British! Hasta luego, mi chiquita! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K JGEL ;P