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Darling, darling, darling! Would I ever abandon ye?! Lol. Many apologies for my lack of reviewing, but my bloody cable company decided to be evil bitches and accidentally disconnect my internet for just about two weeks! Anyways, as always, I am loving the chapters. Absolutely adoring them! Shay is too damn cute for his own good, and Patience is quite the endearing spitfire. Jack and Jenny are perfect, and the little views of Pearl life, away from the plot, are charming. I can't wait to see what is in store for everyone, and I'm still voting for Jenny to have twins! Also, I'm in full support of Shay staying on the island with Jack, Jenny, and Patience. Especially because fecking Valentine knows where they'll be hiding and most likely will cause trouble. Am I right? Anyways. Beutiful chapters, and update soon! ^.^

*Kat

Hi

Am loving this series!!! Keep posting!

Jesus Bloody Christ! That was Bloody brilliant! I loved this chapter. Oh yes, I'M BACK!!!! Did you miss me my dear?? I do so love the funny stuff you put in here. The bit about the palm trees and the fire was hilarious! Oh and poor Shay! He's been attacked by Patience's Flaming Fists of Fury!!! We should nick name her Tiny Fists of Death. What do ya think?

So I have major writer's block and I only have 3 pages written of my newest chapter! Gaaaaaaaaa! Help me if you can, please. Hey do you think you can be my Bata reader? I need some help sometimes when I'm stuck on an idea. Please let me know via email. Thanks and update soon!


-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Oooooh it's getting tense!!! We definately need more chapters! Be sure to exercise your gift often - um, that would be writing ya perv.

Sorry for the tardy! Alas, life has taken over of late and I have had little time for my stories. Why must I be burdened with a job and other various, quiet tedious tasks of "normal" life. I whole heartedly(spell check?) believe that I was meant to marry a rich man and live my life eating bon-bons and reading smutty stories all day while the nanny watches my child! OK I'm rambling, must be the killer headache I've had for FOUR FRICKIN' DAYS! Hope you had a satisfactory turkey day(lucky for you I don't have a Thanksgiving song), mine was de-lish! As always some great writing going on. I am thoroughly captivated by the twists. Glad you gave Shay a woman, I like that she has attitude! But suddenly I'm apprehensive- I just really paid attention to the title of this story and the "Shattered Dreams" part has me worried for Jack and Jenny. And the fate of the babe as well. Hope all works out for them. Well, as always I will be awaiting more updates, though I understand if they come a little late what with all the holiday madness that's about to descend upon us all. Oh, the horror of the mall!!! Happy shopping anyway and keep writing! As always I remain a loyal reader(though sometimes negligent with the reviews). Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K JGEL:)

Why are women with information always so stubborn!? I'll never know. Oh well! Nice chapter I hope you update soon.

-lots-o love-
-Chelsey-

*grins* Pray tell what kind of fight, love? ^.^

And as far as this chapter goes, yay for Shay!!! Yum. ^.^ He's so cute. *snuggles a Shay plushie* But ofcorse, Jack is King. *snuggles life-size Jack plushie* This new girl- Patience- sounds interesting. *rubs chin* Perhaps she will talk. Then Valentine will be DEAD! Woo! And Jack and Jenny would be safer! And then Jenny could have the twins! And everything would be GOOD until ofcorse everyone needed some action, in which case plot would be reintroduced and...well you get the picture.

More Jack is definately a requirement for the next chapter. *nods* I think people will rebel(l?) if they go for over a week without Jack. *snickers* Or mebbe that's just me. EITHER WAY! Excellent chapter and write more soon!

Looking forward to it,
Kat

*giggles* I love that Jenny stood up to Ana Maria. ^.^ Makes her seem extra courageous! Lol. I sense a mutiny on Job Bailey's hand and a possible love interest for Shay? ^.^ By the way, if I never said it before, I really love Shay's character! He seems so cool! And Irish! *smacks lips* Yummy! Jack, as always, is great- even when wounded. Can't wait for the next chapter.

*Kat

Long time no review. Terribly sorry, love. ^.^ Been busy with school and what not, and very short on free time. The last couple chapters have been marvelous! I'm still overjoyed about Jenny being pregnant (and I'm still voting for twins!). It was fun to hear from AnaMaria again. Glad she's got her own ship now. ((I also think her surname was awesome. Very smooth. Lol)) Valentine, however, is a bleeding bastard who needs to DIE. *growls* I'll bet next chapter dear Ol' Jack will be cursing himself for a missed shot. *grumbles* ....Just incase the thought did cross your mind, if you kill Jack off, there will be a hoard of angry, ANGRY women out for your blood. SO PLEASE DON'T KILL THE INFAMOUS, DEVILISHLY SEXY CAPTAIN JACK SPARROW BECAUSE OF A WIMPY LITTLE SHOULDER WOUND!!!!!!!!!! I mean c'mon!! He's Captain JACK SPARROW! *sobs at the fear of dead-Jack* So, yeah. Update soon. Soon soon soon. And death to Valentine. Yeah.

*giggles*
Loves, and great chappy!
*Kat

Holy shit! That was awesome! Jenny's gonna kill Jack when she see's him, even if he is hurt! Don't let Jenny get rapped again! Noth tth the babe on the way. No! Anywho update soon!

-Chels- AKA: HisBeautiful